Insomnia

2010-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

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Two years ago, I extremely suffered insomnia. During that period I totally slept only twelve hours per month. Believe or not believe It's a true. In order to get out of my insomnia I met many doctors however all doctors said that "You are okay, you don't have any problem.". They always answered insincerely. (Since I had a bad experience from doctors, I have not believed the doctor.) Body was already died but I couldn't sleep.... That was a dilema of situation. If I remember suffering insomnia, I'm still awful. Fortunately, my present girl friend makes me sleeping. She is better than doctors.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!..That was a very distressful experience. I do have insomnia but it’s not as worst as your experience. They advised me to eat lettuce before to conquer my insomnia but I didn’t try at all. Hahaha!...But if I’m so tired from work, I can sleep for long hours.Hahaha!See you^^   Two years ago, I extremely suffered insomnia. >>>Two years ago, I extremely suffered from insomnia. During that period I totally slept only twelve hours per month. >>>During that period, I only have twelve hours of sleep every month. Believe or not believe It's a true. In order to get out of my insomnia >>>Believe it or not, it’s true. I want my insomnia to be gone that time. I met many doctors however all doctors said that "You are okay, you don't have any problem." >>>correct  They always answered insincerely. (Since I had a bad experience from doctors, I have not believed the doctor.) >>>They answered me  insincerely always. Since I had a bad experience from doctors, I do no longer believe doctors anymore. Body was already died but I couldn't sleep.... >>>I felt like dying before but still I couldn’t sleep. That was a dilema of situation. >>>That was a dilemma situation.  If I remember suffering insomnia, I'm still awful. >>>If I remember about  my sufferings when I had insomnia, I feel awful. Fortunately, my present girl friend makes me sleeping. >>>Fortunately, my present girlfriend makes me sleep. She is better than doctors. >>>correct  

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