Insomnia
학생이 쓴 원문
Two years ago, I extremely suffered insomnia. During that period I totally slept only twelve hours per month.
Believe or not believe It's a true. In order to get out of my insomnia
I met many doctors however all doctors said that "You are okay, you don't have any problem.". They always answered insincerely. (Since I had a bad experience from doctors, I have not believed the doctor.)
Body was already died but I couldn't sleep....
That was a dilema of situation. If I remember suffering insomnia, I'm still awful. Fortunately, my present girl friend makes me sleeping.
She is better than doctors.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!..That was a very distressful experience. I do have insomnia but it’s not as worst as your experience. They advised me to eat lettuce before to conquer my insomnia but I didn’t try at all. Hahaha!...But if I’m so tired from work, I can sleep for long hours.Hahaha!See you^^
Two years ago, I extremely suffered insomnia.
>>>Two years ago, I extremely suffered from insomnia.
During that period I totally slept only twelve hours per month.
>>>During that period, I only have twelve hours of sleep every month.
Believe or not believe It's a true. In order to get out of my insomnia
>>>Believe it or not, it’s true. I want my insomnia to be gone that time.
I met many doctors however all doctors said that "You are okay, you don't have any problem."
>>>correct
They always answered insincerely. (Since I had a bad experience from doctors, I have not believed the doctor.)
>>>They answered me insincerely always. Since I had a bad experience from doctors, I do no longer believe doctors anymore.
Body was already died but I couldn't sleep....
>>>I felt like dying before but still I couldn’t sleep.
That was a dilema of situation.
>>>That was a dilemma situation.
If I remember suffering insomnia, I'm still awful.
>>>If I remember about my sufferings when I had insomnia, I feel awful.
Fortunately, my present girl friend makes me sleeping.
>>>Fortunately, my present girlfriend makes me sleep.
She is better than doctors.
>>>correct
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