insomnia

I summarized the article regarding to insomnia. People usally vary in need sleep and in required time to sleep. The lack of sleep is called as insomnia. It came from anxiety and stress. Some people are difficult in sleeping because they easily react to stress. Moreover they might undergo bodily dysfunction when can not solve their stress. Also, transient or intermittent isommnia caused by lifestyle such as drinking coffee in the night. The final reason of insomnia is environment where people usually sleep. The noise makes to disturb sleep and the habit in the bed make to be difficult to fall asleep.

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