Inspiring and disappointing movies
학생이 쓴 원문
\'Le miserable\', \'Wonka\' and\' Hero\' make me get interest in musical movie. \'Le miserable\' was a first musical movie I watched. I was surprised of their passion and magnificient size of sound.
I regret to watch movies which have boring storyline. Amazing computer graphic technology is worthless without basic and acceptable storyline. Therefore I regret to watch \'Avatar 2\' (I know someone can\'t understand it). It has unbelievable CG but I can\'t accept the each character\'s behavior and decision. In the same reason, I regret to watch recent movie, \' Hitman2 \'. It was worst movie I\'ve ever seen.
강사 첨삭
Hannah,
I regret to watch movies which have boring storyline.
Thanks for sharing about the movies you like and didn\'t like. I\'m surprise you didn\'t like Hitman 2. I heard it\'s a top tier movie in Korea these days. Although, I haven\'t watch it, so I don\'t know. ^^
-Teacher Ash
\'Le miserable\', \'Wonka\' and\' Hero\' make me get interest in musical movie.
>> \'Le miserable\', \'Wonka\' and\' Hero\' draw my attention to musical movies.
\'Le miserable\' was a first musical movie I watched.
>> \'Le miserable\' was the first musical movie I have watched.
I was surprised of their passion and magnificient size of sound.
>> I was surprised by their enthusiasm and the impressive volume of sound they produced.
I regret to watch movies which have boring storyline.
>> I regret watching movies which have boring storylines.
Amazing computer graphic technology is worthless without basic and acceptable storyline.
>> CORRECT!
Therefore I regret to watch \'Avatar 2\' (I know someone can\'t understand it).
>> As a result, I feel disappointed to see \'Avatar 2\' (I know someone can\'t understand it).
It has unbelievable CG but I can\'t accept the each character\'s behavior and decision.
>> It has unbelievable CGI, but the characters behavior and decisions were unacceptable.
In the same reason, I regret to watch recent movie, \' Hitman2 \'.
>> It\'s the same reason I regret watching the recent movie, \' Hitman2 \'.
It was worst movie I\'ve ever seen.
>>CORRECT!
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