Instead of going shopping
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I don’t think that Shopping is the most popular hobby for young ages,
Many of my friends don’t enjoy shopping .
If there are young people who enjoy shopping, I would like to recommend anther valuable activities for their free time.
First, Enjoy the art! Appreciating exhibitions helps you to stimulate your creativity and gives time to refresh apart from mundane. Or you could be a one of audience participating music concert or musical which is you are interested in; Classic, Jazz, Pop etc. Music has a power to recharge you and experience a song with live brings great joy compare to just listen music by your audio file.
Second, Move your body. There are a lot of opportunities in community related with physical activity.
If you are fond of sea, you can join a dive club or surfing lesson. Or you would go hike and climb if you like the mountain. Also there is some activities for people who don’t like to go out, Doing Yoga or having a personal training lesion are some examples of them.
I don\'t think Shopping is the most popular hobby/past time for young people.
A lot of my friends do not enjoy shopping. If there are young people who enjoy shopping then I would recommend other productive activities to do for their free time.
First, enjoy arts! Appreciating exhibitions helps us to stimulate our creativity and gives time to refresh apart from mundane. Or we could be one of the audience participating music, concert or music that may be interesting like Classic, Jazz, Pop etc. Music has a power to recharge us and makes us feel good.
Second, there are a lot of opportunities in the community that offers physical related activities. If someone is fond of the sea, he can join surfing lessons or hike and climb in the mountain. For people who are introvert, they can do yoga or personal training lessons.
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