Intelligent being in the universe.
학생이 쓴 원문
No one can certainly say something about the existence of another intelligent being in the universe. Even scientists who have conducted numerous research on the outer space and gained a tremendous amount of data and knowledge about it are unable to confirm whether there is a life of some kind. The prevalence of diverse sorts of conspiracy theories and intriguing stories dealing with alien also proves the point. In other words, it is an open-ended question which have been lasted extraordinarily long in the history. In this regard, considering there are far more areas left in the universe that haven\'t been explored yet, I believe that we should focus on the possiblity still remaining. However, what I want to tackle regarding this issue is about the question itself not the truth. It stirs people\'s curiosity and motivates the development of cutting-edge technologies, which might be the real value of the question. In fact, we may never find the alien or already were found by them.
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Hi Drexel! Wonderful thoughts you gave on this one! ^ ^
You gave good sentences, not too wordy and good enough to express your thoughts! Well done! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
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Even scientists who have conducted numerous research on the outer space and gained a tremendous amount of data and knowledge about it are unable to confirm whether there is a life of some kind.
>>CORRECT
The prevalence of diverse sorts of conspiracy theories and intriguing stories dealing with alien also proves the point.
>>CORRECT
In other words, it is an open-ended question which have been lasted extraordinarily long in the history.
>>In other words, it is an open-ended question which has been asked extraordinarily long in the history.
In this regard, considering there are far more areas left in the universe that haven\'t been explored yet, I believe that we should focus on the possiblity still remaining.
>>CORRECT (*possibility)
However, what I want to tackle regarding this issue is about the question itself not the truth.
>>CORRECT
It stirs people\'s curiosity and motivates the development of cutting-edge technologies, which might be the real value of the question.
>>CORRECT
In fact, we may never find the alien or already were found by them.
>>In fact, we may never find the alien or already we are found by them.
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