Interacting with neighbors
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, many people live without interacting with their neighbors, which causes to the problem of no receiving help in dangerous situations each others. For example, if there is a fire or a serious health emergency, they can\'t ask for help. To solve this problem, it is nessasary to promote community activities in the neighborhood.
강사 첨삭
Wishing you a productive and peaceful Tuesday ahead Ms. [Name]! Let’s make today count with all the energy and passion we have. Here’s to tackling the day with focus and enthusiasm! Have a good one!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Today, many people live without interacting with their neighbors, which causes to the problem of no receiving help in dangerous situations with each other.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> Today, many people live in isolation, rarely interacting with their neighbors, which creates a significant problem in times of danger or emergency.
For example, if there is a fire or a serious health emergency, they can\'t ask for help.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
To solve this problem, it is necessary to promote community activities in the neighborhood.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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