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I think I\'m not that creative person..:)
How about rearrange some planet?
I hope they could be possible to place the Mars nearby the Earth.
Then it would become liveable planet too.
On the Mars we could see some water stain, so they expect it would be the next palnet that people can live~~~
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It seems far fetched! hahahaah I live your idea and your imagination! This is an amazing topic that we can talk about later. hahah ^_^
think I\'m not that creative person..:)
>> I think I\'m not that creative person..:)
How about rearrange some planet?
>> How about rearranging some planets?
I hope they could be possible to place the Mars nearby the Earth.
>> I hope it might be possible to place Mars near Earth.
Then it would become liveable planet too.
>> Then, it can become a planet that can support living being too.
On the Mars we could see some water stain, so they expect it would be the next palnet that people can live~~~
>> They said that on Mars, they were able to see some water images and that they are expecting it to be the next planet where people can live someday.
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