International language

2022-12-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! I do not think that a language other than English should be used as an \"international language\". Because all of world people learn and use English as a common language nowadays. let\'s think like that. Would not it be more efficient to use this language with many speakers like Chinese. More specifically 1.4 billion people use Chinese and 5 million people use English in the world. But most people use English. So I do not agree to change English to Chinese an international language.

강사 첨삭

Hey there, William. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the homework topic. And I agree with you on that. English is widely used all around the world and it is enough reason not to change it. I\'ll talk to you in class later. Have a good night. ~Jane ^^


I do not think that a language other than English should be used as an \"international language\". 
>> CORRECT =) 

Because all of world people learn and use English as a common language nowadays. 
>> Because all people in the world learn and use English as a common language nowadays. 

let\'s think like that. 
>> Let\'s think of it this way. 

Would not it be more efficient to use this language with many speakers like Chinese. 
>> Would not it be more efficient to use this language with many speakers like Chinese? 

More specifically 1.4 billion people use Chinese and 5 million people use English in the world. 
>> CORRECT =) 

But most people use English. 
>> CORRECT =) 

So I do not agree to change English to Chinese an international language.
>> So I do not agree with changing English to Chinese as an international language. 

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