International Marriage

2023-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jhozel

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I think it is okay to marry someone of different races. Sometimes I imagined that my daughters introduced their boyfriends from different races. Actually my first daughter used to date a Canadian guy when she was an exchange student. And my second daughter dated a Japanese Canadian guy. I always supported their love. But if my daughters got married to someone of different races and had to live abroad, I would be a little hesitant to support the marriage. Because I don\'t want my daughters to live far away from me.

강사 첨삭

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-T.Jhozel

I think it is okay to marry someone of different races.

>> Correct
OR: I believe it is acceptable to marry someone of a different race.

Sometimes I imagined that my daughters introduced their boyfriends from different races.

>> Correct

Actually my first daughter used to date a Canadian guy when she was an exchange student.

>> Correct
OR: Actually, when my first daughter was an exchange student, she dated a Canadian guy.

And my second daughter dated a Japanese Canadian guy.

>> Correct

I always supported their love.

>> Correct
OR: I always support their relationships.

But if my daughters got married to someone of different races and had to live abroad, I would be a little hesitant to support the marriage.

>> Correct
OR: But if my daughters married someone of a different race and had to live abroad, I would be hesitant to support the marriage.

Because I don\'t want my daughters to live far away from me.

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OR: I don\'t want my daughters to be separated from me.

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