International news
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I think knowing and discussing international news is a very useful class. Because unless we are interested in the problems of international society, we may become like a frog in a well.
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Good afternoon Ms. [Name]! How\'s your day going? Anyway, I always appreciate your effort of accomplishing your essays! Your introduction is engaging and provides a clear preview of your argument. Ideas could be expanded with more detailed discussion though. Keep it up!
>>>TEACHER GEMMA
I think knowing and discussing international news is very useful class.
>>> CORRECT~!
OR>>>I believe that staying informed and discussing international news is a valuable activity.
Because unless we are interested in the problems of international society, we may become like a frog in a well.
>>> Unless we take an interest in global issues, we risk becoming like a frog in a well, unaware of the world beyond our own.
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