Internet Business
학생이 쓴 원문
Internet business is not restricted by time, space, amount, content and the others.
The customers of the Internet business are mainly Y generation.
To succeed, there must be more effort than others.
For example, network constitution, more dense planning and...
I was told that the Internet business is a speed battle.
Indeed, could some businesses be replaced by the net?
My answer is ‘no’
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
Thank you for always doing your best.
I can always see the effort in your work.
I hope you continue doing a good job.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Internet business is not restricted by time, space, amount, content and the others.
>> Internet business is not restricted by time, space, amount, content and others.
The customers of the Internet business are mainly Y generation.
The customers of the Internet business are mainly Y generation.
>> The users of the Internet are mainly members of the Y generation.
To succeed, there must be more effort than others.
To succeed, there must be more effort than others.
>> Correct
For example, network constitution, more dense planning and...
For example, network constitution, more dense planning and...
>> For example, there\'s network constitution and more serious planning.
I was told that the Internet business is a speed battle.
I was told that the Internet business is a speed battle.
>> I was told that the Internet business is a battle of speed.
Indeed, could some businesses be replaced by the net?
Indeed, could some businesses be replaced by the net?
>> Correct
My answer is ‘no’
My answer is ‘no’
>> Correct
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