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2020-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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1. Wow~I guess this is kind of hard question, since I have never thought about that. Let me know who doesn\'t use the internet these days. Almost people lives in an internet environment like air. In Korea, you can use wired and WiFi Internet anywhere. I mean. You can use it anytime, anywhere when you want to use it. As you may already know. I mostly watch the news. Internet news is better than TV because I can only see the information I want. In particular, I often look for the articles of Jo Jeong-seok, whom I always admired. So, I think overall, I use the internet for just about everything. just like everyone else. 2. Hotel Most Koeran hotels are usually located near tourist destinations. When you enter a hotel, there is an information desk where you can check in and out. Staff is very kind and helpful. They provide high quality service. There are very clean interior and exterior.It\'s also luxurious. As you can see, this is what I think of now.

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You did an awesome job [이름]! Please keep in mind all the corrections I made below. ^^
-Teacher Elise


Wow~I guess this is kind of hard question, since I have never thought about that.
>> Wow! I guess this is kind of a hard question since I have never thought about that. 

Let me know who doesn\'t use the internet these days.
>>CORRECT

Almost people lives in an internet environment like air.
>>Most people treat internet like oxygen. It\'s like an essential nowadays. 

In Korea, you can use wired and Wi-Fi internet anywhere.
>>CORRECT

I mean. You can use it anytime, anywhere when you want to use it.
>> I mean you can use it anytime and anywhere. 

As you may already know, I mostly watch the news.
>>CORRECT

Internet news is better than TV because I can only see the information I want.
>> CORRECT

In particular, I often look for the articles of Jo Jeong-seok, whom I always admired.
>> In particular, I look for articles about Jo Jeong-Seok, whom I\'ve always admired. 

So, I think overall, I use the internet for just about everything. just like everyone else.
>>So I think, I use the internet for just about everything just like everybody else. 

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Most Koeran hotels are usually located near tourist destinations.
>> Most Korean hotels are usually located near tourist destinations. 

 When you enter a hotel, there is an information desk where you can check in and out.
>>CORRECT

 Staff is very kind and helpful. 
>>CORRECT

They provide high quality service. 
>>CORRECT

There are very clean interior and exterior. It\'s also luxurious. 
>>CORRECT

As you can see, this is what I think of now.
>>CORRECT

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