Internet is the most effective media.

These days the Internet is prevalent all around the world. In addition, due to the development of cell phone, people can use the internet wherever they are and whenever they want. TV and newspaper contain the information that I am not interested in but people can find what they want to know. However you should be careful when you use the information in the Internet, because it is sometimes incorrect. If you use the Internet wisely, it is very useful.

Hi there [이름]!^^ Great job on this! And I must say that you are very confident in class today! Keep it up! I think among younger generations of people, the internet would be the major source of information. Still the newspaper is very easy for adults since for them, reading with the material on their hands makes them feel satisfied.^^ Check out my corrections below. Thank you!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: These days the Internet is prevalent all around the world. >> CORRECT Or> Internet is widely used around the world these days. In addition, due to the development of cell phone, people can use the internet wherever they are and whenever they want. >> In addition, due to the development of cell phones, people can use the internet wherever they are and whenever they want.  TV and newspaper contain the information that I am not interested in but people can find what they want to know. >> CORRECT OR> I\'m not very interested in newspapers and the television but some people get what they need from it.  However you should be careful when you use the information in the Internet, because it is sometimes incorrect. >> CORRECT Or> Some information on the internet are not accurate so we must be careful.  If you use the Internet wisely, it is very useful. >> CORRECT OR> We can have the internet as a useful tool if used wisely.