Internet is very fast and easy to use.
학생이 쓴 원문
The present technology is changing very fast.
The Internet is vast and very convinient to use.
And it is very interesting.
And it is always open to us anytime and anywhere.
The computer is very interesting machine containing many contents.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thanks again for doing your homework ^^
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The present technology is changing very fast.
>> The present technology is quickly developing.
>> The present technology is quickly developing.
The Internet is vast and very convinient to use.
>> The Internet is vast and very convenient to use.
>> The Internet is vast and very convenient to use.
And it is very interesting.
>> Also, it is very interesting.
>> Also, it is very interesting.
And it is always open to us anytime and anywhere.
>> It is always open to us anytime and anywhere, too.
>> It is always open to us anytime and anywhere, too.
The computer is very interesting machine containing many contents.
>> The computer is a very interesting machine that contains a lot of contents.
>> The computer is a very interesting machine that contains a lot of contents.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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