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I don\'t remind suitable policy in Korea for your question .
The government includind provinces are focusing on giving subsidies for young people.
The reason is that many young people are suffering from getting jobs and a recession.
It is a good phenimenon gradually the govwenment is interested in supporting and counseling for mental issue as social welfare policies.
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Good day, Ms. [이름]!
I appreciate you for doing an effort in writing your thoughts. Well if your government is providing support for the need of society, then I think Korea has a better future. (Not all countries have this kind of support )
Have a good day!
Aki~
I don\'t remind suitable policy in Korea for your question.
>>> I don\'t remember a suitable policy in Korea for your question.
The government includind provinces are focusing on giving subsidies for young people.
>> The government including provinces is focusing on giving subsidies to young people.
The reason is that many young people are suffering from getting jobs and a recession.
>>> CORRECT!
It is a good phenimenon gradually the govwenment is interested in supporting and counseling for mental issue as social welfare policies.
>>> It is a good phenomenon that the government is gradually interested in supporting and counseling mental issues as social welfare policies.
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