Interview 3

It's been my dream to work in Sydney Australia or other English speaking country for a long time. I'd like to show something to you. This is my resume and cover letter written in English. I've sent my resume to Sydney Australia. But I have not received answer yet. I'm sure that you need to know me more. You seem to have very little understanding of me. I'm afraid you just know about me that I'm not good at LOTO procedures. You said that you have a connection with Australia, Newzealand and Singapore. So, If you don't mind I'd like to get a person's E-mail address who is relate to recruitment. May I ask you a big favor. Is it possible to ask you to talk with Australia branch about me in advance. If you do that for me. It will be my huge help. The difficult thing when I work, there is not good role model in my work field. To be frank with you, My office workers seem to live without dream. Every night they get together and drink alcohol and bet some sport game.

Hello again! 

Mr. [Name], correct  me if there are some sentences that I misunderstood. 

You can ask that tomorrow during our class. 

Thanks a lot! 

Always, 
Kathrine ^^

It\'s been my dream to work in Sydney Australia or other English speaking country for a long time.

>> correct! 

I\'d like to show something to you.

>> correct! 

This is my resume and cover letter written in English. 

>> correct! 

I\'ve sent my resume to Sydney Australia.

>> I\'ve sent my resume in Sydney Australia. 

But I have not received answer yet. 

>> But I have not received an answer yet. 

I\'m sure that you need to know me more.

>> correct! 

You seem to have very little understanding of me. 

>> You seems to have a very little understanding of me. 

I\'m afraid you just know about me that I\'m not good at LOTO procedures.
>> I\'m afraid you know that I\'m not good at LOTO procedures. 

You said that you have a connection with Australia, Newzealand and Singapore.

>> correct! 

So, If you don\'t mind I\'d like to get a person\'s E-mail address who is relate to recruitment.

>> So if you don\'t mind, I\'d like to get the person\'s email address who is related to the recruitment. 

May I ask you a big favor.

>> correct! 

Is it possible to ask you to talk with Australia branch about me in advance.

>> Is it possible for you to talk to the Australian branch about me in advance? 

If you do that for me. It will be my huge help.

>> If you do that, it will be a huge help. 

The difficult thing when I work, there is not good role model in my work field.

>> The difficult thing when I am working is that there is no good role model in my field of work. 

To be frank with you, My office workers seem to live without dream.

>> To be frank/honest with you, my office workers seem to live without a dream. 

Every night they get together and drink alcohol and bet some sport game.

>> Every night, they get together, drink alcohol and bet on some sports game.