Interview
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Great Wednesday morning Mr. [Name].
As I told you during our class, it is my work and my pleasure to help you.
I am happy that I am able to help you even in this way.
So no need to worry about it.
I am happy that you are already achieving your dream.
So I really wish you luck.
Fighting!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Dear [Name]
>> correct! (proper punctuation)
I always appreciate your support of my English.
>> correct!
>> correct!
I have good news.
>> I have a good news.
I made promise to meet director Piter who is Germany headquarter member in Korea.
We had a conversation over the phone and he said he had a connection with person who is working Sydney in Australia.
>> We had a conversation over the phone and he said he has a connection with a person who is working in Sydney, Australia.
We are going to meet this Friday and talk about my plan.
>> correct!
I\'m sure that it will be vary important chance to achieve my dream.
>> I\'m sure that it will be a very important chance to achieve my dream.
>> correct!
Thanks your help again.
>> correct!
Fathfully. Adriano
>> Faithfully, Adriano.
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