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2013-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Dear [Name] I always appreciate your support of my English. I can't thank you enough. I have good news. I made promise to meet director Piter who is Germany headquarter member in Korea. We had a conversation over the phone and he said he had a connection with person who is working Sydney in Australia. We are going to meet this Friday and talk about my plan. I'm sure that it will be vary important chance to achieve my dream. So I ask you to proofread my expected questions and answers again. Thanks your help again. Fathfully. Adriano

강사 첨삭

Great Wednesday morning Mr. [Name]. 

As I told you during our class, it is my work and my pleasure to help you. 

I am happy that I am able to help you even in this way. 

So no need to worry about it. 

I am happy that you are already achieving your dream. 

So I really wish you luck. 

Fighting! 


Always, 

Kathrine ^^



Dear [Name]

>> correct! (proper punctuation) 

I always appreciate your support of my English.

>> correct! 

I can\'t thank you enough.
>> correct! 

I have good news.

>> I have a good news. 

I made promise to meet director Piter who is Germany headquarter member in Korea. 

>> I made a promise to meet director Piter (Peter) a member of the Germany headquarter in Korea. 
We had a conversation over the phone and he said he had a connection with person who is working Sydney in Australia.
>>  We had a conversation over the phone and he said he has a connection with a person who is working in Sydney, Australia.

We are going to meet this Friday and talk about my plan.

>> correct! 

I\'m sure that it will be vary important chance to achieve my dream.

>> I\'m sure that it will be a very important chance to achieve my dream. 

So I ask you to proofread my expected questions and answers again.
>>  correct! 
Thanks your help again.
>>  correct! 

Fathfully. Adriano

>> Faithfully, Adriano. 

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