Interview 4

First time when I enter my office, I tried to quit work even though elevator engineer is steady job. because of no dream. By the way, I heard about Sydney Thyssenkrupp branch from my supervisor. Actually, I tried to work in Australia before as a musician. But there was no way to get a job as a musician at that time. After hearing about Australia, I decided to prepare Australia. Studying English more, Getting national elevator licence, Working hard...... If I will work in Australia, My case will give every employees in Koreas strong hope and vision. My disadvantages are language barrier and short work experience comparing to same age engineers. But my language barrier is not the problem for me. I studied my English only in Korea. I have not been to English speaking country for study. That means, I didn't have enough chance to practice my English. So, If I have a chance to work in English speaking country.

Hello there again! 

I noticed that you mostly forget the proper use of articles. 

So you need to be more aware of that. 
And also the proper use of preposition. 

Be careful when to use such prepositions. 

Always, 
Kathrine ^^

First time when I enter my office, I tried to quit work even though elevator engineer is steady job.

>> The first time that I entered my office, I tried to quit my work even though an elevator engineer is a steady job. 

because of no dream.

>> Because I have no dream. 

By the way, I heard about Sydney Thyssenkrupp branch from my supervisor.

>>  By the way, I heard about the Sydney Thyssenkrupp branch from my supervisor.

Actually, I tried to work in Australia before as a musician.

>> correct! 

But there was no way to get a job as a musician at that time.

>> correct! 

After hearing about Australia, I decided to prepare Australia.

>>  After hearing about Australia, I decided to prepare to go there. 

Studying English more, Getting national elevator licence, Working hard......

>> correct! (spelling correction-license)

If I will work in Australia, My case will give every employees in Koreas strong hope and vision.
>> If I will work in Australia, my case will give every employee in Korea a storng hope and a vision. 

My disadvantages are language barrier and short work experience comparing to same age engineers.

>> My disadvantages are language barrier and short work experience comparing to same old engineers.  

But my language barrier is not the problem for me.

>> But language barrier is not a problem for me. 

I studied my English only in Korea.

>> I studied English only in Korea. 

I have not been to English speaking country for study.

>>  I have not been to an English speaking country to study. 

That means, I didn\'t have enough chance to practice my English.

>> That means that I didn\'t have enough chance to practice my English.  

So, If I have a chance to work in English speaking country.

>> So, if I have a chance to work in an English speaking country, .....