Interview 5

2013-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

I will have more chance to practice my English. Then my language barrier will be disappear. And my second disadvantage is short work experience. I'm strongly believe that I've already overcame my disadvantage through hard working and study about elevator. I got a national certificate Industrial engineer. It is not easy to pass exam. And I think I properly could confidently say I specialize in TKE model despite of my short career. I completed advanced TKE course this year. and I belong to TKE adjustment team now. So, I'm sure that short work experience is not the problem for me. Currently, I am in charge of the TKE around 60 models You can check all these things and my work evaluation through Yon operator Dae-Jeon headquarter. What are the requirements need to apply to Sydney Australia. If they want installation engineer. I can fix their request. I have experience to work installation team very often. So, If they want. I'll learn to install elevator more.

강사 첨삭

And my last hello. 

Thanks for the trust you have given me to check your sample answers Mr. [Name]. 

I appreciate it much. 

So if you have further questions and clarifications, just tell me during our class. 

See you tomorrow! 

Enjoy the rest if the day! 


Always, 
Kathrine ^^


I will have more chance to practice my English.

>> I will have more chances to practice my English. 

Then my language barrier will be disappear. 

>> Then my language barrier will disappear. 

And my second disadvantage is short work experience.

>> And my other disadvantage is the short of work experience. 

I\'m strongly believe that I\'ve already overcame my disadvantage through hard working and study about elevator.

>> I strongly believe that I\'ve already overcame that disadvantage through working hard and studying about elevator. 

I got a national certificate Industrial engineer.

>> I got a National Certificate for Industrial Engineering. 

It is not easy to pass exam.

>> It is not an easy exam to pass. 

>> or: it is not easy to pass the exam. 

And I think I properly could confidently say I specialize in TKE model despite of my short career.

>> And I think, I could confidently say that I specialize in TKE model despite the short period of my career. 

I completed advanced TKE course this year.

>> I completed an advanced TKE course this year. 

and I belong to TKE adjustment team now. 

>> And I belong to the TKE adjustment team now. 

So, I\'m sure that short work experience is not the problem for me.

>> So I\'m sure that a short working experience is not a problem for me. 

Currently, I am in charge of the TKE around 60 models 

>> correct! 

You can check all these things and my work evaluation through Yon operator Dae-Jeon headquarter.
>> correct! 

What are the requirements need to apply to Sydney Australia.

>> What are the requirements needed to apply in Sydney, Australia. 

 If they want installation engineer. I can fix their request.

>> If they want an installation engineer, I can grant their request. 

I have experience to work installation team very often.

>> I have an experience working with the installation team very often. 

 So, If they want. I\'ll learn to install elevator more.

>> So if they want, I\'ll learn more about elevator installation. 


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