Interview 5
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
And my last hello.
Thanks for the trust you have given me to check your sample answers Mr. [Name].
I appreciate it much.
So if you have further questions and clarifications, just tell me during our class.
See you tomorrow!
Enjoy the rest if the day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I will have more chance to practice my English.
>> I will have more chances to practice my English.
Then my language barrier will be disappear.
And my second disadvantage is short work experience.
>> And my other disadvantage is the short of work experience.
I\'m strongly believe that I\'ve already overcame my disadvantage through hard working and study about elevator.
>> I strongly believe that I\'ve already overcame that disadvantage through working hard and studying about elevator.
I got a national certificate Industrial engineer.
>> I got a National Certificate for Industrial Engineering.
It is not easy to pass exam.
>> It is not an easy exam to pass.
>> or: it is not easy to pass the exam.
And I think I properly could confidently say I specialize in TKE model despite of my short career.
>> And I think, I could confidently say that I specialize in TKE model despite the short period of my career.
I completed advanced TKE course this year.
>> I completed an advanced TKE course this year.
and I belong to TKE adjustment team now.
>> And I belong to the TKE adjustment team now.
So, I\'m sure that short work experience is not the problem for me.
>> So I\'m sure that a short working experience is not a problem for me.
Currently, I am in charge of the TKE around 60 models
>> correct!
>> correct!
What are the requirements need to apply to Sydney Australia.
>> What are the requirements needed to apply in Sydney, Australia.
If they want installation engineer. I can fix their request.
>> If they want an installation engineer, I can grant their request.
I have experience to work installation team very often.
>> I have an experience working with the installation team very often.
So, If they want. I\'ll learn to install elevator more.
>> So if they want, I\'ll learn more about elevator installation.
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