Interview

Hello Marcela! Thank you for sending in your composition. I think that you did well with it. I just made a few corrections. See below. Have a great day!~T.Dee

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I would like to say thank you for giving me a great chance to introduce myself.

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>>OR: I would like thank you for giving this opportunity to introduce myself.
My name is [Name] LEE

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 First of all, I want to tell you about my work experience in the customer service field which gives me many chances to improve myself in many ways.

>> First of all, I want to tell you about my work experience in the customer service field which had given me many chances to improve myself in many ways.
I worked as a member of customer service support team for 6years at interpark which is a leading e-commerce site in Korea.

>>I worked with a customer service support team for 6 years at Interpark which is a leading e-commerce site in Korea.
Now I work for a company that government-published textbooks and reference books.

>>Now, I work for a company which produces government-published textbooks and reference books.
 While I was working there communicate with various people.

>> While working, I get the chance to communicate with various people.
 I also have many abroad experience including Kuwait and Saudi Arabia.

>> I also have several work experiences abroad including Kuwait and Saudi Arabia.
So I`m accustomed to living in Middle East.

>>This is why I`m accustomed to living in the Middle East.
 I learned different cultures and languages while meeting various people.

>> I learned about different cultures and languages while meeting various people

I believe that my unique experience in Mddle East will be a great help to work as cabin crew in your company.

>>I believe that my unique experience in the Middle East greatly help while I work as cabin crew in your company.
Thank you for listening to my introduction.

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>>OR: That\'s all and thank you for again for this opportunity.