Interview & answer

2013-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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1.Family back ground. I think all my family members have service DNA. My parents were owner of a restaurant for 20 years. They always tried to care about customer and focused on running the restaurant. So, I could learn service manner naturally. 2.Education back ground I graduated [이름]nam uni.,and majored business administration. I could learn cash flow, marketing and customer management. For me, the most interesting subject was customer's psychology. After graduation, I went abroad to take intensive English course to work in international environment efficiently. From this experience, I became to have better understanding for other culture & people. 3.Can you explain yourself in a word? I would like to explain myself as Espresso. With Ice or water & milk, espresso can be mixed well. I can get along with people who have different background.

강사 첨삭

Good Morning [이름], Thank you very much for taking the initiative to write about yourself. Anyway, I have here my corrections and please feel free to ask questions if you did not understand something from our class or from my corrections. See you later! T. Sheela 1.Family back ground.I think all my family members have service DNA. >> I think all my family memebers share the same DNA. My parents were owner of a restaurant for 20 years. >>Correct! >>OR: My parents owned a restaurant for 20 years. They always tried to care about customer and focused on running the restaurant. >>They always tried to care for their customers and focused on running the restaurant. So, I could learn service manner naturally. >>So, I have learned how to serve someone naturally.2.Education back groundI graduated [이름]nam uni.,and majored business administration. >>I graduated in [이름]nam University and I majored in Business Administration. I could learn cash flow, marketing and customer management. >>I have learned cash flow, marketing and customer\'s management. For me, the most interesting subject was customer\'s psychology. >>Correct! After graduation, I went abroad to take intensive English course to work in international environment efficiently. >>After graduation, I went abroad to have an intensive English course so that I can efficiently work in an international environmental company. From this experience, I became to have better understanding for other culture & people. >> From this experience, I have come to understand other peoples culture. 3.Can you explain yourself in a word? >>Can you describe yourself in one word?I would like to explain myself as Espresso. >> I am like an Expresso. With Ice or water & milk, espresso can be mixed well. >>Expresso can be mixed with ice, water or milk. I can get along with people who have different background. >>It means, I can get along with people who have different personalities.

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