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* Why do you want to be a flight attendant at ? I've had a lot of experience working in the service industry since my university days. I worked at The largest in the world, Shin se gae department store. Although, I stood about 11 hours a day, I didn't feel tired. While working there, I enjoyed working in a service field, meeting different people and getting along with them. So, I wanted to find a professional job in the service field where my skills and experiences can be utilized. That's the job description of a flight attendant. Is It correct?

Hi there,             Good afternoon! How are you doing? Good job in your composition. I made few corrections. Please be guided. T. Aurora * Why do you want to be a flight attendant? >>CorrectI\'ve had a lot of experience working in the service industry since my University days. >>Correct I worked at The largest in the world, Shin se gae department store. >>I worked at the largest department store in the world which is Shin Se Gae.Although, I stood about 11 hours a day, I didn\'t feel tired. >>Although, I stood for 11 hours a day I didn\'t feel tired. While working there, I enjoyed working in a service field, meeting different people and getting along with them. >>While working there, I enjoyed being in the service field, meeting different people and getting along with them. So, I wanted to find a professional job in the service field where my skills and experiences can be utilized. >>Correct That\'s the job description of a flight attendant.>>CorrectIs It correct? >>Correct