interview Qand A

2012-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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* what do you think about the uniform ? I think it makes to imagine the blue sky. I always feel happy on watching the sky. so, I think the Korean air uniform can makes to feel good passengers in a flight. * what is the hobby? My hobby is playing a guitar. the guitar soung makes me more comfortable. so, these days, I enjoy to play it. *How are you? I'm so nervous and excited to be here. because I'm worried about I will take a mistake for this interview. * what did you prepared to be a fly attendant ? first, I'm studying English with phone English program every morning. also, I learned to swim. I know it is basic preparing. but, I was scared water, so I tried to learn swimming difficultly. but now I'm enjoying it and water. I think I will do constantly. *what is the service? I think it is making passengers can feel comfortable in a flight. so, I'll treat them with a great attitude and smile.

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Hey there Lyn!  I\'ve listed down some suggestions as well apart from my corrections. Maybe you could get some ideas from that.   T. Aurora   * what do you think about the uniform ? >>Correct!I think it makes to imagine the blue sky. I always feel happy on watching the sky. >>It looks great. It makes me imagine the blue sky. I always feel happy watching the sky.so, I think the Korean air uniform can makes to feel good passengers in a flight.>>So I think that wearing the Korean air uniform can make me feel good working and serving the passengers. OR YOU CAN SAY: >>I love wearing a uniform and I think that the Korean Air uniform looks great. Wearing a uniform is a constant reminder to me of how proud I am being officially a part of something big. It makes me feel good and neat and helps me build confidence to face the passengers and work hard each day.   * what is the hobby? >>What is your hobby?My hobby is playing a guitar. >>My hobby is playing the guitar.  the guitar soung makes me more comfortable. >>The guitar sound make me feel relaxed.so, these days, I enjoy to play it. >>So these days, I enjoy playing it. OR YOU CAN SAY >>I enjoy playing the guitar. Playing the guitar helps me unwind and forget about the stress of life.   *How are you? >>How are you feeling right now?I\'m so nervous and excited to be here. because I\'m worried about I will take a mistake for this interview. >>I\'m so nervous and excited to be here because I\'m worried about making a mistake in this interview. OR YOU CAN SAY: >>Honestly, I\'m feeling nervous and excited  right now. But more than that, I feel honored to be given the chance to be here in front of all of you. * what did you prepared to be a fly attendant ? >>How did you prepare to be a flight attendant?first, I\'m studying English with phone English program every morning. >>First, I\'m studying English via a phone English program every morning.also, I learned to swim. I know it is basic preparing. >>Also, I took up swimming classes because I know it\'s one of the basic requirements.but, I was scared water, so I tried to learn swimming difficultly. >>I am scared of the water so I had a hard time learning how to swim.  but now I\'m enjoying it and water. >>But now I\'m enjoying it a lot.I think I will do constantly. >>I think I will do it regularly.   OR YOU CAN SAY: >>I am studying English everyday via a phone English program and on my own. I put great importance on speaking English fluently as I know how relevant that is in this line of work. I also learned swimming. Though I am scared of the water, I tried to conquer it because I realy love to be a flight attendant. *what is the service? >>What in your opinion is \"service\" ?I think it is making passengers can feel comfortable in a flight. >>I think it is making the passengers feel comfortable in their flight. so, I\'ll treat them with a great attitude and smile. >>So, I\'ll tread them with a great attitude and a warm smile.   OR YOU CAN SAY: >> Service to me means being able to give a good first impression by providing efficient and effective satisfaction on their needs.  

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