interview Qand A
학생이 쓴 원문
* what do you think about the uniform ?
I think it makes to imagine the blue sky. I always feel happy on watching the sky.
so, I think the Korean air uniform can makes to feel good passengers in a flight.
* what is the hobby?
My hobby is playing a guitar. the guitar soung makes me more comfortable.
so, these days, I enjoy to play it.
*How are you?
I'm so nervous and excited to be here.
because I'm worried about I will take a mistake for this interview.
* what did you prepared to be a fly attendant ?
first, I'm studying English with phone English program every morning.
also, I learned to swim. I know it is basic preparing.
but, I was scared water, so I tried to learn swimming difficultly. but now I'm enjoying it and water.
I think I will do constantly.
*what is the service?
I think it is making passengers can feel comfortable in a flight.
so, I'll treat them with a great attitude and smile.
강사 첨삭
Hey there Lyn! I\'ve listed down some suggestions as well apart from my corrections. Maybe you could get some ideas from that.
T. Aurora
* what do you think about the uniform ?
>>Correct!I think it makes to imagine the blue sky. I always feel happy on watching the sky.
>>It looks great. It makes me imagine the blue sky. I always feel happy watching the sky.so, I think the Korean air uniform can makes to feel good passengers in a flight.>>So I think that wearing the Korean air uniform can make me feel good working and serving the passengers.
OR YOU CAN SAY:
>>I love wearing a uniform and I think that the Korean Air uniform looks great. Wearing a uniform is a constant reminder to me of how proud I am being officially a part of something big. It makes me feel good and neat and helps me build confidence to face the passengers and work hard each day.
* what is the hobby?
>>What is your hobby?My hobby is playing a guitar.
>>My hobby is playing the guitar.
the guitar soung makes me more comfortable.
>>The guitar sound make me feel relaxed.so, these days, I enjoy to play it.
>>So these days, I enjoy playing it.
OR YOU CAN SAY
>>I enjoy playing the guitar. Playing the guitar helps me unwind and forget about the stress of life.
*How are you?
>>How are you feeling right now?I\'m so nervous and excited to be here. because I\'m worried about I will take a mistake for this interview.
>>I\'m so nervous and excited to be here because I\'m worried about making a mistake in this interview.
OR YOU CAN SAY:
>>Honestly, I\'m feeling nervous and excited right now. But more than that, I feel honored to be given the chance to be here in front of all of you.
* what did you prepared to be a fly attendant ?
>>How did you prepare to be a flight attendant?first, I\'m studying English with phone English program every morning.
>>First, I\'m studying English via a phone English program every morning.also, I learned to swim. I know it is basic preparing.
>>Also, I took up swimming classes because I know it\'s one of the basic requirements.but, I was scared water, so I tried to learn swimming difficultly.
>>I am scared of the water so I had a hard time learning how to swim.
but now I\'m enjoying it and water.
>>But now I\'m enjoying it a lot.I think I will do constantly.
>>I think I will do it regularly.
OR YOU CAN SAY:
>>I am studying English everyday via a phone English program and on my own. I put great importance on speaking English fluently as I know how relevant that is in this line of work. I also learned swimming. Though I am scared of the water, I tried to conquer it because I realy love to be a flight attendant.
*what is the service?
>>What in your opinion is \"service\" ?I think it is making passengers can feel comfortable in a flight.
>>I think it is making the passengers feel comfortable in their flight. so, I\'ll treat them with a great attitude and smile.
>>So, I\'ll tread them with a great attitude and a warm smile.
OR YOU CAN SAY:
>> Service to me means being able to give a good first impression by providing efficient and effective satisfaction on their needs.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.