interview QandA

2012-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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* what will you do after this interview ? It's first time to be here. I will take a lot of photos to think them. *Why do you want to join us? I like your airline makes to imagine the blue sky. I always feel happy on watching the sky. so, I think I can work with a happy everyday. also, Korean air is top airline in Korea. To be a part of you prestigious company would be a privilege being a very motivated and goal oriented person. *what's the best service? I think It's offer service like their family. It need to treat more concern . so they can spend to feel more comfortable in a flight. *why should we hire you? what are your strengths? I have extensive experience in the service field, self-motivation, and excellent communication and interpersonal skills. I worked at The largest department store in the world which is Shin Se Gae. Although, I stood for 11 hours a day, but I didn't feel tired. while working there, I enjoyed working in the service field, meeting different people and getting along with them. * Have you ever been abroad ? Yes, I've been to America to study English for 6 months on university English program(not exchange). * How did you study English in there? I took three classes of listening, grammar and speaking. also, I learned from My homestay's child.

강사 첨삭

Well thanks for giving your composition. Try to learn more vocabularies which you could use to answer the questions. Words like \"prestigious\" and \"privilege\" are really good choice on words. But enrich your vocabulary more to make your answers better.  Let\'s practice more on interview questions later.   T. Aurora   * what will you do after this interview ? >>Correct!It\'s first time to be here. >>It\'s my first time here. I will take a lot of photos to think them. >>So, I\'d probably take some pictures to help me think about some things.*Why do you want to join us? >>Correct!I like your airline makes to imagine the blue sky. >>I like that your airlines makes me imagine the blue sky. I always feel happy on watching the sky. >>I always feel happy watching the sky. so, I think I can work with a happy everyday. >>So I think I can work happy everyday.also, Korean air is top airline in Korea. >>Also, Korean Air is the top iarline in Korea. To be a part of you prestigious company would be a privilege being a very motivated and goal oriented person. >>Correct!   *what\'s the best service? >>Correct!I think It\'s offer service like their family. >>I think it\'s the kind of service you would give to your family.  It need to treat more concern . >>You need to treat peopl with genuine concern. so they can spend to feel more comfortable in a flight. >>In that way, they would feel more comfortable in their flight.*why should we hire you? what are your strengths? >>Correct!I have extensive experience in the service field, self-motivation, and excellent communication and interpersonal skills. >>I have extensive experience in the service field, I\'m self motivated, and has excellent communication and interpersonal skills.I worked at The largest department store in the world which is Shin Se Gae. >>I work at the largest department store in the world which is Shin Se Gae.  Although, I stood for 11 hours a day, but I didn\'t feel tired. >>Although I stood for 11 hours a day, I still didn\'t feel tired.  while working there, I enjoyed working in the service field, meeting different people and getting along with them. >>While working there, I enjoyed doint my work, meeting different people and found it easy to get along with them.* Have you ever been abroad ? >>Correct!Yes, I\'ve been to America to study English for 6 months on university English program(not exchange). >>Yes, I\'ve been to America to study English for 6 months on a University English Program.* How did you study English in there? >>Correct!I took three classes of listening, grammar and speaking. >>I took three classes of listening, grammar and speaking. also, I learned from My homestay\'s child. >>Also, I learned fom my roommate.

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