Interview question 2!
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. Introduce yourself.
A. Hello, my name is [이름] Kwon and I'm twenty two years old. I was born in Ulsan and I live in Asan now. I'm a student of Hanyang University and my major is English Language and Literature. When I have a free time, I enjoy watching movies and shopping because I have a lot of interest in fashion. My strength is that I always think about how the other accepts before doing or speaking something. So I hardly have a conflict with others. In contrast, I'm timid so when I have a presentation or an interview, I'm very nervous. To overcome the weakness, I joined the school club 'HUMM' in which the club members lecture about one's major to highschool students. As I'm interested in fashion and English, I want to be a fashion MD of foreign clothing companies.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ellie!
Have a great Money!
You did great in your introduction.
Good Luck in your interview. I hope that you will remember everything.
See you in our next class!
Teacher Daisy^^
Q. Introduce yourself.
A. Hello, my name is [이름] Kwon and I\'m twenty two years old.
>>> Correct!
I was born in Ulsan and I live in Asan now.
>>> Correct!
I\'m a student of Hanyang University and my major is English Language and Literature.
>>> Correct!
When I have a free time, I enjoy watching movies and shopping because I have a lot of interest in fashion.
>>> Correct!
My strength is that I always think about how the other accepts before doing or speaking something.
>>> My strength is that I always think about how others accept before doing or speaking something.
So I hardly have a conflict with others.
>>> Correct!
In contrast, I\'m timid so when I have a presentation or an interview, I\'m very nervous.
>>> Correct!
To overcome the weakness, I joined the school club \'HUMM\' in which the club members lecture about one\'s major to highschool students.
>>> To overcome the weakness, I joined the school club \'HUMM\' in which the club members lecture about one\'s major to high school students. (high school)
As I\'m interested in fashion and English, I want to be a fashion MD of foreign clothing companies.
>>> Correct!
Have a great Money!
You did great in your introduction.
Good Luck in your interview. I hope that you will remember everything.
See you in our next class!
Teacher Daisy^^
Q. Introduce yourself.
A. Hello, my name is [이름] Kwon and I\'m twenty two years old.
>>> Correct!
I was born in Ulsan and I live in Asan now.
>>> Correct!
I\'m a student of Hanyang University and my major is English Language and Literature.
>>> Correct!
When I have a free time, I enjoy watching movies and shopping because I have a lot of interest in fashion.
>>> Correct!
My strength is that I always think about how the other accepts before doing or speaking something.
>>> My strength is that I always think about how others accept before doing or speaking something.
So I hardly have a conflict with others.
>>> Correct!
In contrast, I\'m timid so when I have a presentation or an interview, I\'m very nervous.
>>> Correct!
To overcome the weakness, I joined the school club \'HUMM\' in which the club members lecture about one\'s major to highschool students.
>>> To overcome the weakness, I joined the school club \'HUMM\' in which the club members lecture about one\'s major to high school students. (high school)
As I\'m interested in fashion and English, I want to be a fashion MD of foreign clothing companies.
>>> Correct!
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