Interview question

1) Tell me about yourself. I graduated fron K[이름]won University, I majored in clothin design.When I was senior, I participated in an intrnship program in Levi's from August 2007 to January 2008. During 6months this internship program provided me with lots of knowledge and interesting of account. Also I like to be challenged, so I'm not afraid to try new tasks. And the intership make me qulified for accounting. 2) What have you achievements been? 2years ago, LS&CO planned cut the budget in Finance salary. So we have to terminated one person. My goal is resucing the working hour in payment process. I succefully reduce the working time from 3days to 1.8 days, and minimised paper work and well-communication woth Bank. And late year, Our company changed main bank from BoA to HSBC. After the finished HSBC net training, fund transfer to HSBC, and successful testing about payment, VA, and sweeping. And then, smoothly collaboration new bank HSBC on SAP.

Hello there! :)Thank you so much for your composition. Here  are the following corrections. Have a wonderful evening! :) 1) Tell me about yourself. >>CorrectI graduated fron K[이름]won University, I majored in clothin design. >>I graduated from K[이름]won University, I majored in clothing design. When I was senior, I participated in an intrnship program in Levi\'s from August 2007 to January 2008. >>When I was a senior, I participated in an internship program of Levi\'s from August 2007 to January 2008. During 6months this internship program provided me with lots of knowledge and interesting of account. >>For 6 months, this internship program provided me with lots of knowledge and interesting accounts. Also I like to be challenged, so I\'m not afraid to try new tasks. >>Correct And the intership make me qulified for accounting. >>And the internship made me qualified for accounting.2) What have you achievements been? >>What are your achievements?2years ago, LS&CO planned cut the budget in Finance salary. >>2 years ago, LS & CO planned to cut the budget in the finance salary. So we have to terminated one person. >>So we have to terminate one person. My goal is resucing the working hour in payment process. >>My goal is to rescue the working hour in the payment process. I succefully reduce the working time from 3days to 1.8 days, and minimised paper work and well-communication woth Bank. >>I successfully reduced the working time from 3 days to 1.8 days and minimized the paper work and well communication with the bank. And late year, Our company changed main bank from BoA to HSBC. >>On the later yearm our company changed the main bank from BoA to HSBC. After the finished HSBC net training, fund transfer to HSBC, and successful testing about payment, VA, and sweeping. >>After the finished HSBC net training, the funds were transferred to HSBC and was successfully tested about the payment, VA, and sweeping. And then, smoothly collaboration new bank HSBC on SAP. >>And then, we smoothly collaborated with the new bank, HSBC, on SAP.