Interview Question

2011-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Karen

학생이 쓴 원문

3) Are you happy with your carrer? Yes. My major is clothing design. But after the intership, I changed my career to accounting. Then I hope learn more accounting, so I'm studying the accounting in Cyber University and 1 year later, I'll get a Bachelor of Business management. 4) What is the most difficult situation you have had to face and how did you tackle it? If I have a problem, first I try to solve the problem by myself. But sometimes it couldn't solves, then I asked to my manager. Because I beleive she aleady know about what should I do. Before I had probelm in my payment process, I asked to my manager, she advice to me how to comunicate with bank.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss. [Name]! You did a good job in writing this composition. Your answers are very good and concise. Please check the corrections I noted below. Have a nice evening! -T. Karla-   3) Are you happy with your carrer? >>3) Are you happy with your career?Yes. >>Yes, I am. My major is clothing design. >>Correct But after the intership, I changed my career to accounting. >> But after the internship, I changed my career to accounting. Then I hope learn more accounting, so I\'m studying the accounting in Cyber University and 1 year later, I\'ll get a Bachelor of Business management. >> Then I hope to learn more about accounting, so I\'m studying accounting in a Cyber University and 1 year later, I\'ll get a Bachelor\'s degree in Business management.4) What is the most difficult situation you have had to face and how did you tackle it? >>CorrectIf I have a problem, first I try to solve the problem by myself. >>Correct But sometimes it couldn\'t solves, then I asked to my manager. >> But for problems that I couldn\'t solve, I ask my manager for assistance. Because I beleive she aleady know about what should I do. >> Because I believe that she already knows about what should I do. (Then I can learn from her solutions) Before I had probelm in my payment process, I asked to my manager, she advice to me how to comunicate with bank. >>Before, I had a problem in my payment process, I asked  my manager, she advised me on how to communicate with the bank. (From this experience I know what to do if it happens again.)

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