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2016-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Daisy

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Q. Why do you apply to an exchange student program? A. Frist of all, I want to use English not as a subject to be tested but as a language to communicate with friends. Of course, that is possible in Korea, but because I'm not confident in speaking English and most of the students are Korean, I don't try to make foreign friends here. So through an exchange student program, I'm going to put myself in an situation where I can't help using English and trying to be close with foreigners, and it will improve my speaking skill. And by experiencing many diverse things, I want to expand my mind and grow mentally. Q. Have you ever been to another country? A. The only time I went abroad is when I traveled to China with my family for about one week. But I've never studied abroad. That's one of the reasons why I applied to an exchange student program. With this opportunity, I'd like to study abroad and experience many things.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ellie!

You have good sentences for these questions.
Please see the corrections below and study them.

Again, Good luck to you! Aja!

Teacher Daisy^^

Q. Why do you apply to an exchange student program?
A. Frist of all, I want to use English not as a subject to be tested but as a language to communicate with friends.
>>> First (spelling)
>>> Correct Sentence
Of course, that is possible in Korea, but because I\'m not confident in speaking English and most of the students are Korean, I don\'t try to make foreign friends here.
>>> Of course, that is possible in Korea, but because I\'m not confident in speaking English and most of the students here are Korean, I don\'t try to make foreigner friends here.
So through an exchange student program, I\'m going to put myself in an situation where I can\'t help using English and trying to be close with foreigners, and it will improve my speaking skill.
>>> So through an exchange student program, I\'m going to put myself in a situation where I can\'t help using English and try to be close with foreigners, and I think that it will improve my speaking skill.
And by experiencing many diverse things, I want to expand my mind and grow mentally.
>>> And by experiencing many diverse things, I want to expand my knowledge and grow intellectually.

Q. Have you ever been to another country?
A. The only time I went abroad is when I traveled to China with my family for about one week.
>>> Correct!
But I\'ve never studied abroad.
>>> Correct!
That\'s one of the reasons why I applied to an exchange student program.
>>> Correct!
OR >>>  That\'s one of the reasons why I applied to this exchange student program.
With this opportunity, I\'d like to study abroad and experience many things.
>>> Correct!

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