Interview self introduction
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Self introduction
- Could you introduce your self?
\"Hello, my name is Young in Lee. I recently graduated with a Bachelor\'s Degree in Dance from Chungnam National University in South Korea, where I specialized in ballet. Prior to that, I graduated from Chungnam Arts High School, where I also majored in ballet. My education has given me a strong foundation in both classical and contemporary dance, and I have developed a deep interest in choreography and movement expression.
One of my key strengths is my ability to blend technical skill with creative expression. I am passionate about exploring new movement styles and continuously pushing myself to innovate and expand my artistic boundaries.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Young In! thanks for letting me check your answer! I\'ll try to simplify it! Have a day ahead!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Hello, my name is Young in Lee. I recently graduated with a Bachelor\'s Degree in Dance from Chungnam National University in South Korea, where I specialized in ballet. Before that, I graduated from Chungnam Arts High School, where I also majored in ballet. My education has given me a strong foundation in both classical and contemporary dance, and I have developed a strong passion in choreography and movement expression.
I excel in technical skill with creative expression. I love exploring new movements and continuously push myself to innovate and expand my artistic limits.
I excel in technical skill with creative expression. I love exploring new movements and continuously push myself to innovate and expand my artistic limits.
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