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2013-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1. What is the reasons for applying? I made my New year's resolutions. First, I will try to lose weight. Second, I will study hard in English. I want to study English because I can't speak English well. Also, I would like to help the Hwacheon sancheoneo iced festival. Hwachoen sancheoneo ice Festival is opened in every January Under the slogan of " Unfrozen Hearts, Unforgettable Memories" at Hwacheon. It is very famous. So many foreign tourists visit every year. I hope all my resolutions will came true New year's. 2. What is learning goals? First, I Would like to eliminate the fear for the English. I am bad at English now. however, I will try in order to do well before the training next year. Finally, The English proficiency will get better when this education ends.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Miss. [Name], good evening! Thank you so much for sending in your composition tonight.. You did great in your homework.. If you really want to eliminate your fear, just enjoy English everytime we have our class. I know it may sound kind of joke but on the other hand it may be helpful as well.. Don\'t worry I am here to help you okay Miss. [Name].. Just ask me any questions so I could help you with your queries.. Take care always and have a good night.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1. What is the reasons for applying?>>correct OR: What is my reason in applying for this position?I made my New year\'s resolutions. >>correctFirst, I will try to lose weight. >>correctSecond, I will study hard in English. >>correct OR: Second, I will study English hard.I want to study English because I can\'t speak English well. >>correctAlso, I would like to help the Hwacheon sancheoneo iced festival.>>I also like to help in the Hwacheon Sancheoneo Ice festival. Hwachoen sancheoneo ice Festival is opened in every January >>Hwacheon Sancheoneos Ice festival is held every January.Under the slogan of \" Unfrozen Hearts, Unforgettable Memories\" at Hwacheon. >>correctIt is very famous. So many foreign tourists visit every year.>>correct OR: Many foreigners visit our country every year. I hope all my resolutions will came true New year\'s. >>correct2. What is learning goals?>>correctFirst, I Would like to eliminate the fear for the English. >>First I would like to eliminate my fear in using English.I am bad at English now. however, I will try in order to do well before the training next year. >>correctFinally, The English proficiency will get better when this education ends. >>Finally, my English proficiency will get better when this class ends.

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