Interview1
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Anna!
It\'s my pleasure to be your teacher. Thank you for preparing your self-introduction ahead of time. You did well in expressing yourself.
However, there are some lapses so I advise you to check on the corrections provided. I\'ll see you on our next class.
Have a good day!
T. Anne^^
1. Tell me about yourself.
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hello, it\'s honor to be here.
>>Hello, it\'s an honor to be here.
my name is han na eun.
>>My name is [Name] Na Eun.
I live in Bucheon, Gyeonggi-do with my mom.
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and i have one older sister and she has been married.
>>I have an older sister and she is already married.
my mission statement is that \" trying to do always\".
>>My motto in life is \"Try and try until you succeed\".
I majored in nursing and I have one year hands-on experience.
>>I majored in Nursing and had a hands-on experience for a year.
and worked as CRC for over two years.
>>I also worked as a CRC for more than two years.
and than I have worked as CRA in CRO for three years.
>>And then I worked as a CRA in a CRO company for three years.
I want to work your company and progress to more valuable member and proffesional CRA.
>>I want to work in your company so that I can be a professional CRA and to be a valuable employee.
2. What are your strengths?
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I think that my strength is that I look at first advantage of other people rather than weakness.
>>I think my strength is that I look at other people\'s strengths rather than their weaknesses.
also, others say that i am a good listener.
>>Others also say that I am a good listener.
3. What are your weakness?
>>What is your weakness?
I’m a perfectionist and I consider this to be my weakness because it’s very stressful to me.
>>I’m a perfectionist and I consider this to be my weakness because it’s very stressful for me.
To overcome this, I try to prioritize getting work done on time, taking into account the benefits that an efficient workflow can bring.
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