Interview1

2018-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Tell me about yourself. hello, it's honor to be here. my name is han na eun. I live in Bucheon, Gyeonggi-do with my mom. and i have one older sister and she has been married. my mission statement is that " trying to do always". I majored in nursing and I have one year hands-on experience and worked as CRC for over two years and than I have worked as CRA in CRO for three years. I want to work your company and progress to more valuable member and proffesional CRA. 2. What are your strengths? I think that my strength is that I look at first advantage of other people rather than weakness. also, others say that i am a good listener. 3.What are your weakness? I’m a perfectionist and I consider this to be my weakness because it’s very stressful to me. To overcome this, I try to prioritize getting work done on time, taking into account the benefits that an efficient workflow can bring.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Anna!

It\'s my pleasure to be your teacher. Thank you for preparing your self-introduction ahead of time. You did well in expressing yourself.

However, there are some lapses so I advise you to check on the corrections provided. I\'ll see you on our next class.

Have a good day!

T. Anne^^


1. Tell me about yourself.

>>CORRECT!

hello, it\'s honor to be here.

>>Hello, it\'s an honor to be here.

my name is han na eun.

>>My name is [Name] Na Eun.

I live in Bucheon, Gyeonggi-do with my mom.

>>CORRECT!

and i have one older sister and she has been married.

>>I have an older sister and she is already married.
 my mission statement is that \" trying to do always\".

>>My motto in life is \"Try and try until you succeed\".
 I majored in nursing and I have one year hands-on experience.

>>I majored in Nursing and had a hands-on experience for a year.

and worked as CRC for over two years.

>>I also worked as a CRC for more than two years.

and than I have worked as CRA in CRO for three years. 

>>And then I worked as a CRA in a CRO company for three years.
 I want to work your company and progress to more valuable member and proffesional CRA.

>>I want to work in your company so that I can be a professional CRA and to be a valuable employee.

2. What are your strengths?

>>CORRECT!

I think that my strength is that I look at first advantage of other people rather than weakness.

>>I think my strength is that I look at other people\'s strengths rather than their weaknesses.

also, others say that i am a good listener.

>>Others also say that I am a good listener.

3. What are your weakness?

>>What is your weakness?

I’m a perfectionist and I consider this to be my weakness because it’s very stressful to me.

>>I’m a perfectionist and I consider this to be my weakness because it’s very stressful for me.

To overcome this, I try to prioritize getting work done on time, taking into account the benefits that an efficient workflow can bring.

>>CORRECT!




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