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I'm here Chen-Nan factory. Where shall we meet? Is there good place to talk with you? It's good to see you and thank you for your time. It's been almost 1 year since we met I've never been to this place. I've heard that the materials division moved here. As you know,our company's material inventory management system should be changed. It must have something problem. So do you know why materials division move to here? I hope it is an effort to change materials delivery system to effective. I know some guys who are working other elevator our rival company Otis and Hunday. Of course they worked our company before. They said Thyssenkrupp Korea's material delivery and quality is the worst. As a Thyssenkrupp member, My pride has been hurt. I hope it will be changed soon. As I mentioned previously over the phone, The reason why I visited you today is about my dream. I have a dream to work in an English speaking country.

Hi there again Mr. [Name]. 

Well, you could just check the corrections I have written below. 

Thanks a bunch! 

Always, 

Kathrine ^^

I\'m here Chen-Nan factory.

>> I\'m here in Che-Nan factory. 

Where shall we meet?

>> correct! 

>> or: Where are we going to meet? 

Is there good place to talk with you?

>> Is there a good place to talk with you? 

>> or: Is there a good place where we can talk? 

It\'s good to see you and thank you for your time.

>> correct! 

It\'s been almost 1 year since we met

>>  correct! 

I\'ve never been to this place.

>>  correct! 

I\'ve heard that the materials division moved here.

>>  correct! 

As you know,our company\'s material inventory management system should be changed.

>>  correct! 

It must have something problem.

>> It must have a problem on something. 

So do you know why materials division move to here?

>> So do you know why the material division moved here? 

I hope it is an effort to change materials delivery system to effective. 

>> I hope that it is an effort to change the material delivery system to be effective. 

I know some guys who are working other elevator our rival company Otis and Hunday.

>> I know some guys who are working on our rival company Otis and Hunday (Hyundai). 

Of course they worked our company before. 

>> Of course, the worked ion our company before. 

They said Thyssenkrupp Korea\'s material delivery and quality is the worst.

>> They said that Thyssenkrupp Korea\'s material delivery and quality is worst. 

As a Thyssenkrupp member, My pride has been hurt.

>> correct! 

I hope it will be changed soon.
>> correct! 

As I mentioned previously over the phone, The reason why I visited you today is about my dream.

>> correct! 

I have a dream to work in an English speaking country.

>> correct!