Introduce

2022-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

My name is [Name] [이름] Kyung, and you can call me Annie. I am 25 years old in korean age. I live in Bo-JungDong, which is 30 [이름]ute away from Seoul. We are 4 in the family. I have a younger sister and her name is Shim [이름] Hee. I am senior in university now. I like hiking and playing flute.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Annie!

Thank you for doing your homework and expressing yourself through writing. Keep sharing your thoughts:)

T. Aki~

My name is [Name] [이름] Kyung, and you can call me Annie.

>>> CORRECT

I am 25 years old in Korean age.

>>> CORRECT
I live in Bo-JungDong, which is 30 [이름]utes away from Seoul.

>>> CORRECT
We are 4 in the family.

>>> CORRECT
I have a younger sister and her name is Shim [이름] Hee.

>>> CORRECT

I am senior in university now. I like hiking and playing flute.

>>> I am a senior in university now. I like hiking and playing the flute.

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