Introduce about Canada
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Canada is called a country of immigrants because people of different races live together. That is why we have seen the respect and understanding of each other’s culture without racial discri[이름]ation. I stayed in Toronto, the largest city in Canada, the Canadian were always kind to me. If I need help, they always help me.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your experience in Canada.
I think, it\'s good to live there.
My friend works in Canada and she has a lot of good words about the country.
See you!
_Teacher Dianne
>> Canada is called a country of immigrants because people of different races live there together.
That is why we have seen the respect and understanding of each other’s culture without racial discri[이름]ation.
>> correct
I stayed in Toronto, the largest city in Canada, the Canadian were always kind to me.
>> I stayed in Toronto, the largest city in Canada, and Canadians were always kind to me.
If I need help, they always help me.
>> correct
>> or: When I needed their help, they always helped me.
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