Introduce my family
학생이 쓴 원문
Let me introduce my family.
My mom, dad, older brother and me.
I am a youngest in my family, and my brother is 2 years older than me.
So when we were young, we had very many time to fight.
But now we don\'t do it. I already know he love me.
And my parents do not live with us.
Brother and I live in Seoul.
And my parents live in Gangwondo-Samchuck, because my father\'s work place.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
What a wonderful family you have. Thanks for sharing. :)
Let me introduce my family.
>> CORRECT
My mom, dad, older brother and me.
>> CORRECT
I am a youngest in my family, and my brother is 2 years older than me.
>> CORRECT
So when we were young, we had very many time to fight.
>> When me and my younger were young, we used to fight a lot.
But now we don\'t do it. I already know he love me.
>> But now, we don\'t anymore. I already know that he loves me.
And my parents do not live with us.
>> CORRECT
Brother and I live in Seoul.
>> My brother and I live in Seoul.
And my parents live in Gangwondo-Samchuck, because my father\'s work place.
>> And my parents live in Gangwondo-Samchuck because my father works there.
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