Introduce my house\\\'s rooms
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I can also tell you about my house.
There are two bedrooms, two bathrooms, a kitchen, a dining room and a living room.
One bedroom is for me and my husband and the other is a guest room.
The walls of the house have a yellow color so it\'s very cozy and bright.
My favorite room is the kitchen because I love to cook.^^
You described the rooms in your house in a specific manner.
I always appreciate it when you write like this.
You did a wonderful job!^^
Teacher Sharon =)
Our house has three rooms in total.
>> There is a total of three rooms in our house.
The first room is my parent\'s room, the second room is my brother\'s room, and the last room is our study room.
>> The first room is my parents\' room, the second room is my brother\'s room, and the last room is our study room.
First, my parent\'s room is my parent\'s bedroom.
>> First, my parents\' room is where they sleep.
There is a bathroom, a bed and a closet for my parents.
>> Correct
The second room is used by me and my sister, and there are two beds attached to it, and there are things that I can call my sister and our closet dressing table.
>> Correct
Lastly, the third room is a space shared by the family, which includes a computer, a desk for studying, a piano and a drawer for various things.
>> Correct
I usually solve all the activities related to studying in this room.
>> I usually do all the activities related to studying in this room.
Speaking of this, I want to be introduced to Mrs. [Name]\'s room!
>> Speaking of this, I also want to hear about Sharon\'s room!
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