Introduce my house\\\'s rooms

2019-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Our house has three rooms in total. The first room is my parent\'s room, the second room is my brother\'s room, and the last room is our study room. First, my parent\'s room is my parent\'s bedroom. There is a bathroom, a bed and a closet for my parents. The second room is used by me and my sister, and there are two beds attached to it, and there are things that I can call my sister and our closet dressing table. Lastly, the third room is a space shared by the family, which includes a computer, a desk for studying, a piano and a drawer for various things. I usually solve all the activities related to studying in this room.Speaking of this, I want to be introduced to Mrs. [Name]\'s room! -teacher! I delayed my essay for a few days because I didn\'t have time! I\'m so sorry about that.-

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

I can also tell you about my house.

There are two bedrooms, two bathrooms, a kitchen, a dining room and a living room.

One bedroom is for me and my husband and the other is a guest room.

The walls of the house have a yellow color so it\'s very cozy and bright.

My favorite room is the kitchen because I love to cook.^^

You described the rooms in your house in a specific manner.

I always appreciate it when you write like this.

You did a wonderful job!^^


Teacher Sharon =)


Our house has three rooms in total.

>> There is a total of three rooms in our house.

The first room is my parent\'s room, the second room is my brother\'s room, and the last room is our study room.

>> The first room is my parents\' room, the second room is my brother\'s room, and the last room is our study room.

First, my parent\'s room is my parent\'s bedroom.

>> First, my parents\' room is where they sleep.

There is a bathroom, a bed and a closet for my parents.

>> Correct

The second room is used by me and my sister, and there are two beds attached to it, and there are things that I can call my sister and our closet dressing table.

>> Correct

Lastly, the third room is a space shared by the family, which includes a computer, a desk for studying, a piano and a drawer for various things.

>> Correct

I usually solve all the activities related to studying in this room.

>> I usually do all the activities related to studying in this room.

Speaking of this, I want to be introduced to Mrs. [Name]\'s room!

>> Speaking of this, I also want to hear about Sharon\'s room!


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