introduce my self
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello~!! Alice~
It was so nice to see you yesterday.^^
let me introduce my self shortly~
my name is [이름] [이름] Jung.But if u want, just call me sam. it's my english name.
now i live in Ulsan city. and there are four people in my family including my father, my mother, and my young sister.
I was gratuated from Busan National Univercity in this year, and my major is international trade.
currently, im preparing for V.I.P(volunteer internship program) in cananda, so im
suppose to leave for that country about in the middle of on January next year.
so i wanna imrove my English skill from this our conversation untill that day.
in addtion, i hope to make a good relationship through this time
thank u ~ good bye~~~^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there Sam!
Thank you very much for sending this over. ^^
It was also nice meeting with you, Sam. I am looking forward to have a good relationship with you as well. We will surely help hand-in-hand to improve your English ability.
Anyway, I want you to familia rize the rules for capitalization. This is very important for writing.
Capitalize . . .
1. the first word of a sentence.
2. first singular pronoun, \"I\".
3. proper nouns.
a. names of persons, places (streets, countries, cities, etc.)
4. major words in titles of books, articles, and songs.
Also, kindly go over to some corrections I made for your write-up.
Hope this helps! Talk to you later, Sam!
Enthusiastically,
~ Teacher ALICE
Hello~!! Alice~>> Hello Alice!It was so nice to see you yesterday.^^>> Correct!let me introduce my self shortly~>> Let me introduce myself shortly. my name is [이름] [이름] Jung.
>> My name is [이름] [이름] Jung.
But if u want, just call me sam.
>> But if you want, just can call me Sam.
it\'s my english name.>> It\'s my English name.now i live in Ulsan city.
>> Now I live in Ulsan City.
and there are four people in my family including my father, my mother, and my young sister.>> There are four people in my family including my father, my mother, and my young sister.I was gratuated from Busan National Univercity in this year, and my major is international trade.>> I gratuated from Busan National University in this year, and my major is International Trade.currently, im preparing for V.I.P(volunteer internship program) in cananda, so im suppose to leave for that country about in the middle of on January next year.>> Currently, I\'m preparing for V.I.P (Volunteer Internship Program) in Cananda, so I\'m suppose to leave for that country about in the middle of January next year.so i wanna imrove my English skill from this our conversation untill that day.>> So I wanna improve my English skill from our conversation until that day.in addtion, i hope to make a good relationship through this time >> In addition, I hope to make a good relationship through this time.thank u ~ good bye~~~^^
>> Thank you. Good bye! ^^
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