introduce my self

2013-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

학생이 쓴 원문

1. _did_ the teacher explain this properly? 2. _was_ the professor angry? 3. __had you spoken to him before he called you? 4. If you hadn't told me, I would have never found out. 5. _were_ they seeing each other? My name is [Name] Man-Jae. My first name is Sagong. but many people are misunderstanding my first name as Sa MY home place is kyeong-ju where famous temple and ancient memorial place is in. I graduated Air Force Academy, I majored in electronic engineering. But I would like to learn medical course. I think I am qaulified person because I have courage to withstand frustration, enthusiasm to overcome hard time. So I apply for medical course. If I am selected, I do my best to take caring patient. thank you

강사 첨삭

Good day! Your self-introduction is great!^^ You have included some basic information about you as well as other interesting details. But I would like to challenge you to develop it even more. I would also like to remind you that in written English, punctuations and capitalization are necessary just like in your homework. So here are my corrections and hope you have a great day! Teacher Nina 1. _did_ the teacher explain this properly?>>Did the teacher explain this properly?2. _was_ the professor angry?>>Was the professor angry?3. __had you spoken to him before he called you?>>Had you spoken to him before he called you?4. If you hadn\'t told me, I would have never found out.>>Correct!5. _were_ they seeing each other?>>Were they seeing each other?My name is [Name] Man-Jae.>>Correct!My first name is Sagong. but many people are misunderstanding my first name as Sa>>My first name is Sagong but many people misunderstand my first name as Sa.MY home place is kyeong-ju where famous temple and ancient memorial place is in.>>My hometown is Kyeong-ju which is famous for temples and ancient memorial places. >>or My hometown is Kyeong-ju which is famous for a beautiful temple and an ancient memorial place.I graduated Air Force Academy, I majored in electronic engineering. >>I graduated from an Air Force Academy where I majored in Electronic Engineering.But I would like to learn medical course. >>But I would also like to take-up a medical course. I think I am qaulified person because I have courage to withstand frustration, enthusiasm to overcome hard time.>> I think I will do well because I have the courage to withstand frustrations and enthusiasm to overcome difficulties.So I apply for medical course.>>At the moment, I am already applying for a medical course.If I am selected, I do my best to take caring patient.>>If I will be selected, I will do my best to take care of my patients.^^ thank you >>Thank you. or That\'s all, thank you.^^

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