Introduce my self

2015-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Hello, teacher. I am so happy about you are my teacher! :D I think I have to introduce about me, because you don't know well about me now. My korean name is Ha-min,Jung, which means God's person, Jung and my english name is [이름], which means bubbly and carefree girl. I am 15 years old, usually koreans say for kidding 'North koreans can't invade because of who are 15 years old', because it is a peak of adolescence. Next, I want to introduce about my hobbies. I like to watch foreign dramas. 'GLee' is my favorite drama, but my mother said 'I can't watch it ever', because I am addicted to it. Also I love to listned pop song. Katy Perry and One Direction are my favorite singers. Honestly, I love One Direction more than Katy Perry. lollol. My favorite songs are 'Roar' and 'What makes you beautiful', and I hope to go to their concert, but they don't come to Korea. :( These are some informations about my self. I want to be closer with you. Bye~

강사 첨삭

Wow! You are such an interesting girl. Yes, you are! I really appreciate you for telling me something about yourself. Great job! Well, I think we have the same things in common. I like listening to pop songs too. Not only that, I love Katy Perry and One Direction too. It is really unbelievable! Me too! I want to have a great relationship with you. I want you to know that I am not just your teacher but a friend too. Hahaha! Anyway, I will call you then again tomorrow dear. You must be sleeping right now so, sleep well. Sweet dreams! -Teacher Chloe Hello, teacher. >>Correct! I am so happy about you are my teacher! :D >>I am so happy that you are my teacher. I think I have to introduce about me, because you don\'t know well about me now. >>I think I have to introduce myself because you don\'t know me well yet. My korean name is Ha-min,Jung, which means God\'s person, Jung and my english name is [이름], which means bubbly and carefree girl. >>My korean name is Ha-min Jung. My name \"Jung\" means God\'s person. My english name is [이름], which means bubbly and carefree girl.I am 15 years old, usually koreans say for kidding \'North koreans can\'t invade because of who are 15 years old\', because it is a peak of adolescence. >>I am 15 years old. Usually, when Koreans are at the age of 15, they make a joke of it. They usually say\" North Koreans can\'t invade because you are already 15 yers old\". It means that we are already at the peak of adolescence. Next, I want to introduce about my hobbies. >>I want to tell you about my hobbies.I like to watch foreign dramas. >>Correct! >>I like watching foreign dramas. (Use present perfect tense when we are talking hobbies and habits) \'GLee\' is my favorite drama, but my mother said \'I can\'t watch it ever\', because I am addicted to it. >>\"Glee\" is my favorite TV program. But, my mother told me that I should not watch it because I am getting addicted to it. Also I love to listned pop song. >>Also, I love listening to pop songs. Katy Perry and One Direction are my favorite singers.>>Katy Perry and One Direction members my favorite singers. Honestly, I love One Direction more than Katy Perry. lollol. >>Honestly, I love One Direction singers more than Katy Perry. (Oh, it is because they are truly handsome! Hahah)My favorite songs are \'Roar\' and \'What makes you beautiful\', and I hope to go to their concert, but they don\'t come to Korea. :( >>My favorite songs are \"Roar\" by Katy Perry and \"What makes you beautiful\" by One Direction. I hope to go to their concerts when they will have tour shows in our country. (These songs are really lovely. They are my favorites too. )These are some informations about my self. >>These are some of the information about me. I want to be closer with you. >>I want to be closer with you. Bye~ >>Bye! >>Goodbye!

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