Introduce my self
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!
I\'m so happy to have you in my class.
Thank you for your introduction.
I look forward to meeting you today.
Let\'s always have fun while learning.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Hello! Sharon teacher,this is [이름].
>> Hello, Teacher Sharon, this is [이름].
today I\'m going to talk you about me.
>> Let me tell you about myself today.
My name is [이름] and I am so glad to meet you.
>> Correct
I am now 13 years old.
>> I am 13 years old.
Also, I have mother, father, younger sister, they love me and I am a proud daughter.
>> I also have my mother, father, and younger sister with me.
they love me and I am a proud daughter.
>> They love me and I\'m proud to be their daughter and sister.
My personality is very energatic, active and kind.
>> I have a very energetic, active and kind personality.
I am very nervous about one to one class,
>> I am very nervous about having a one-on-one English class.
but I want that we make a good time.
>> However, I want to have a good time in our classes.
In details, I don\'t know my scedul,
>> I don\'t know my schedule exactly.
so I hope you teach me about more information.
>> I hope you can give me more information.
Thank you and see you on Friday!
>> Correct
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