Introduce my self

2019-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello! Sharon teacher,this is [이름]. today I\'m going to talk you about me. My name is [이름] and I am so glad to meet you. I am now 13 years old. Also, I have mother, father, younger sister, they love me and I am a proud daughter. My personality is very energatic, active and kind. I am very nervous about one to one class, but I want that we make a good time. In details, I don\'t know my scedul, so I hope you teach me about more information.Thank you and see you on Friday! Bye~ - [이름]-

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]!

I\'m so happy to have you in my class.

Thank you for your introduction.

I look forward to meeting you today.

Let\'s always have fun while learning.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Hello! Sharon teacher,this is [이름].

>> Hello, Teacher Sharon, this is [이름].

today I\'m going to talk you about me.

>> Let me tell you about myself today.
My name is [이름] and I am so glad to meet you.

>> Correct

I am now 13 years old.

>> I am 13 years old.
Also, I have mother, father, younger sister, they love me and I am a proud daughter.

>> I also have my mother, father, and younger sister with me.

they love me and I am a proud daughter.

>> They love me and I\'m proud to be their daughter and sister.
My personality is very energatic, active and kind.

>> I have a very energetic, active and kind personality.

I am very nervous about one to one class,

>> I am very nervous about having a one-on-one English class.
 but I want that we make a good time.

>> However, I want to have a good time in our classes.

In details, I don\'t know my scedul,

>> I don\'t know my schedule exactly.

so I hope you teach me about more information.

>> I hope you can give me more information.

Thank you and see you on Friday!

>> Correct

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