Introduce my strength
학생이 쓴 원문
I can close to anyone. I learned how to make a good relationship through the social activity such as the social baseball team, rock band. I played the baseball with variety people who are even 20 years older than me at the baseball team. If I enter the company, I can keep the good relationship with co-workers.
강사 첨삭
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Teacher Monica
Correction:
I can close to anyone.
>> I can easily get close with anyone.
I learned how to make a good relationship through the social activity such as the social baseball team, rock band.
>> I learned how to make a good relationship through social activities such as social baseball team and a rock band.
I played the baseball with variety people who are even 20 years older than me at the baseball team.
>> I played baseball with variety of people who are even 20 years older than me at the baseball team
If I enter the company, I can keep the good relationship with co-workers.
>> If I enter the company, I can keep the good relationship with my co-workers.
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