Introduce my strength

2010-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

학생이 쓴 원문

I can close to anyone. I learned how to make a good relationship through the social activity such as the social baseball team, rock band. I played the baseball with variety people who are even 20 years older than me at the baseball team. If I enter the company, I can keep the good relationship with co-workers.

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Hi [이름]! Let's check your composition Teacher Monica Correction: I can close to anyone. >> I can easily get close with anyone. I learned how to make a good relationship through the social activity such as the social baseball team, rock band. >> I learned how to make a good relationship through social activities such as social baseball team and a rock band. I played the baseball with variety people who are even 20 years older than me at the baseball team. >> I played baseball with variety of people who are even 20 years older than me at the baseball team If I enter the company, I can keep the good relationship with co-workers. >> If I enter the company, I can keep the good relationship with my co-workers.

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