Introduce myself

2024-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello My name is [Name] [이름]. I\'m 32 years old. After 2 month, I will be 33 years old. Time flies so fast.,so little sad about it. I majojred in English, but I think that I;m very not good at speaking English, so I decided to joint the Power English class with Catch. Learing English with Catchy is makes me believe that I can speak more fluently than I think. Now I don\'t have worry when I saying English. My final goal is proceeding presentation or discussion with the company coworker with English, therefore I have to try my best to study English.

강사 첨삭

Hello Gloria,

Thank you for sharing your introduction! You did a great job, and I’m really proud of the progress you’ve made so far. It’s amazing to see how confident you’re becoming in speaking English, and I love that you have a clear goal to improve. Keep believing in yourself-you’re definitely on the right track!

We will keep practicing together in our upcoming classes to help you get even better. I’m sure you’ll continue to improve and reach your goals!

Great job, and keep up the hard work!

~Teacher Cathy

 

Hello My name is [Name] [이름].

>>Hello, my name is Gloria [이름].

I\'m 32 years old. After 2 month, I will be 33 years old.

>>I\'m 32 years old. I will turn 33 years old after two months.

Time flies so fast.,so little sad about it.

>>Time flies so fast, and I\'m a little sad about it.

I majojred in English, but I think that I;m very not good at speaking English, so I decided to joint the Power English class with Catch.

>>I majored in English, but I think I\'m not very good at speaking English, so I decided to join Power English with Cathy.

Learing English with Catchy is makes me believe that I can speak more fluently than I think.

>>Learning English with Cathy makes me believe that I can speak more fluently than I think.

Now I don\'t have worry when I saying English.

>>Now I don\'t have to worry when I speak English.

My final goal is proceeding presentation or discussion with the company coworker with English, therefore I have to try my best to study English.

>>My final goal is to give presentations or have discussions with my coworkers in English, so I have to do my best to study English.

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