Introduce myself
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello ^^
My name is park [이름] and 25 years old.
I live in uijeong bu.
I majored in visual design at Myeong ji college
My family has five people
There are parents, older sister, younger brother and I
I'm second thougher ^^
currently I work at administration office of saemal elementary school
I like to tidy that's my hobby ~
I always want to be in overseas air field so I'd like to speak english well and I have to .
anyway I can't speak english well now
from now on I'm going to practice more with power enlish ^^
help me ~~~
강사 첨삭
Hello Eu[이름], I'm glad you wrote on this page, anyway if you have any questions about the lesson please do
Write in here to clarify. I know that you are eager to improve your skill so don't worry I will do my best to help You progress. I hope we get along well as we go along with our lesson.
Have a good time.
ANNE..:()
Hello ^^ My name is park [이름] and 25 years old.
>> My name is [Name][이름] and I am 25 yearsI live in uijeong bu.
>> Correct^^I majored in visual design at Myeong ji college
>>correct^^My family has five people
>> There are 5 members in my family.There are parents, older sister, younger brother and I
>> My parents, older sister, younger brother and I.I'm second thougher ^^
>> I am the second daughter.currently I work at administration office of saemal elementary school
>>correct^^I like to tidy that's my hobby ~
>> Cleaning is my hobby.I always want to be in overseas air field so I'd like to speak english well and I have to .>> I always like going out pf the country, that's why I want to speak English well and I have to.anyway I can't speak english well now
>>correct^^from now on I'm going to practice more with power enlish ^^
>>correct^^help me ~~~
>>correct^^
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