Introduce myself

2010-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Anna

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Hello ^^ My name is park [이름] and 25 years old. I live in uijeong bu. I majored in visual design at Myeong ji college My family has five people There are parents, older sister, younger brother and I I'm second thougher ^^ currently I work at administration office of saemal elementary school I like to tidy that's my hobby ~ I always want to be in overseas air field so I'd like to speak english well and I have to . anyway I can't speak english well now from now on I'm going to practice more with power enlish ^^ help me ~~~

강사 첨삭

Hello Eu[이름], I'm glad you wrote on this page, anyway if you have any questions about the lesson please do Write in here to clarify. I know that you are eager to improve your skill so don't worry I will do my best to help You progress. I hope we get along well as we go along with our lesson. Have a good time. ANNE..:() Hello ^^ My name is park [이름] and 25 years old. >> My name is [Name][이름] and I am 25 yearsI live in uijeong bu.  >> Correct^^I majored in visual design at Myeong ji college  >>correct^^My family has five people  >> There are 5 members in my family.There are parents, older sister, younger brother and I  >> My parents, older sister, younger brother and I.I'm second thougher ^^  >> I am the second daughter.currently I work at administration office of saemal elementary school >>correct^^I like to tidy that's my hobby ~  >> Cleaning is my hobby.I always want to be in overseas air field so I'd like to speak english well and I have to .>> I always like going out pf the country, that's why I want to speak English well and I have to.anyway I can't speak english well now >>correct^^from now on I'm going to practice more with power enlish ^^  >>correct^^help me ~~~ >>correct^^

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