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About divorce in Korea
At the past time, just 100 years ago, divorce is not permitted especially for women in Korea.
At that time, women didn't have the right of divorce. Because they thought wives belonged to husbands.
But nowadays divorce is common thing in Korea. Many couples are willing to split up if they realize that they don't have something in common even though they are married.
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Hi! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the situation in Korea caused by Divorce. I must say that there should be an importance regarding our concept of marriage since we always think that marriage is as important as maintaining a healthy society which is a result of a complete and happy family. See you in class!
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About divorce in KoreaAt the past time, just 100 years ago, divorce is not permitted especially for women in Korea.
>> A hundred years ago, divorce was not allowed in Korea especially for Korean women.At that time, women didn\'t have the right of divorce. Because they thought wives belonged to husbands.
>> During those times, women didn't have the right to divorce their husbands since people thought women are their husbands' possession.
But nowadays divorce is common thing in Korea.
>> But right now, divorce is becoming a common scenario in Korea.
Many couples are willing to split up if they realize that they don\'t have something in common even though they are married.
>> Correct!
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