Introduce myself

2010-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello. Let me introduce myself to you. My name is [Name] An. My English name is [이름]. I'm 36years old and I'm an elementary school teacher. I've been taught for 13years but teaching is still difficult for me. I was married 10 years ago. But I and my husband met when I was a freshman and we were dating for 8years, so it has passed about 17years since we met. It is very long time I think, but we still love each other. I have two sons. One is 10 years old and the other is 6. Older son likes to play baseball and read books. Younger son likes to play with lego and read books with me because he doesn't read by hmself yet. On weekends, I usually go to the library with my family. Fortunately, It is very close to my home. It takes 5 minutes by walk.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!!   It’s so nice to meet you. I am [Name] Shy. I don’t know if you remember me but I think I spoke to you yesterday for your level test. Anyway, you seem to have a very happy life with your family.  I can feel your happiness upon reading this composition. I hope I can also have a wonderful family like you d when I get married.. ^^ See you in class!!   T. Shy   I've been taught for 13years but teaching is still difficult for me.>> I've been teaching for 13years but teaching is still difficult for me. I was married 10 years ago. But I and my husband met when I was a freshman and we were dating for 8years, so it has passed about 17years since we met.>> I was married 10 years ago but my husband and I met when I was a freshman and we were dating for 8years, so it has been about 17 years since we met. It is very long time I think, but we still love each other.>> It has been a very long time but we still love each other. Older son likes to play baseball and read books. Younger son likes to play with lego and read books with me because he doesn't read by hmself yet.>> The eldest likes to play baseball and read books. The youngest likes to play with Lego and read books with me because he can’t read by himself yet. Fortunately, It is very close to my home. It takes 5 minutes by walk. >> Fortunately, it is very close to my home. It takes 5 minutes by foot.  

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