Introduce myself
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Hi there~! It was great to have a class with you today! Check out my corrections and apply them next time! ^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
My name is [Name].
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I majored in Visual communication Design.
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I have worked experience about design academy lecturer nearly 5 years.
>> I have a work experience as a design academy lecturer for nearly 5 years.
I can communicate to everyone no matter how old they are.
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while I was working there, I enjoyed meeting with various students and their parents too.
>>While I was working there, I enjoyed meeting with various students and their parents too.
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I have learned how to communicate and feel sympathetic for someone\'s mind deeply.
>> I have learned how to communicate and sympathize someone\'s mind deeply.
It was a really good experience for me.
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and when I was university student, I worked as a waitress at a cafe and restaurant for many years. so I learned how to communicate with various customers. and I can understand how to satisfy of customer\'s needs.
>>When I was a university student, I worked as a waitress at a cafe and restaurant for many years. so I learned how to communicate with various customers. and I can understand how to satisfy customer\'s needs.
If I have chance, this opportunity helped me to developed more, and especially with my positive mind and lively personality in my service. and trust towards customer\'s in a professional way.
>> If I have a chance, this opportunity will help me to improve more, and especially with my positive mind and lively personality in my service, and trust towards customer\'s in a professional way.
I really dream to be a flight attendant.
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I can definability do that.
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so I hope that you like my experience and thank you for listening.
>>So I hope that you be impressed with my experience and thank you for listening.
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