Introduce myself
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon Gabby!
Did you have lunch?
I had lunch of bulgogl, beef radish soup and lettuce.
It is sunny today. I really love this weather.
I dislike rain, wind and cold. So I hope to live in Southeast Asia after retire.
I was borned 1960 years cute 5th child.
My siblings are 4 sisters, 3 brothers.
Now, I was 2 children\'s mother and wife a husband.
Times really was runed fast.
I live in Gyeonggi-do. It is located in the south Seoul.
I try to anything smile, enjoy, happy.
I didn\'t become a big rich but I am happy.
See you tomorrow... Gabby.
From Susan.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Suzan. Good job! See you later in our class. T
- T. Gabby :)
Good afternoon Gabby!
>> Correct.
Did you have lunch?
>> Correct.
I had lunch of bulgogl, beef radish soup and lettuce.
>> I had lunch. I ate bulgogi, beef radish soup and lettuce.
It is sunny today. I really love this weather.
>> It\'s a sunny day. I really love this weather.
I dislike rain, wind and cold. So I hope to live in Southeast Asia after retire.
>> I dislike rain, wind and cold that\'s why I hope to live in Southeast Asia after I retire.
I was borned 1960 years cute 5th child.
>> I was born in 1960. I am cute and I am the 5th child in the family.
My siblings are 4 sisters, 3 brothers.
>> I have 4 sisters and 3 brothers.
Now, I was 2 children\'s mother and wife a husband.
>> Now, I have a husband and 2 children.
Times really was runed fast.
>> Time really fliest fast.
I live in Gyeonggi-do. It is located in the south Seoul.
>> I live in Geyeonggi-do. It is located in South Seoul.
I try to anything smile, enjoy, happy.
>> I always smile and I want to always be happy.
I didn\'t become a big rich but I am happy.
>> I didn\'t become rich but I am happy.
See you tomorrow... Gabby.
>> See you tomorrow, Gabby.
From Susan.
>> Correct.
- T. Gabby :)
Good afternoon Gabby!
>> Correct.
Did you have lunch?
>> Correct.
I had lunch of bulgogl, beef radish soup and lettuce.
>> I had lunch. I ate bulgogi, beef radish soup and lettuce.
It is sunny today. I really love this weather.
>> It\'s a sunny day. I really love this weather.
I dislike rain, wind and cold. So I hope to live in Southeast Asia after retire.
>> I dislike rain, wind and cold that\'s why I hope to live in Southeast Asia after I retire.
I was borned 1960 years cute 5th child.
>> I was born in 1960. I am cute and I am the 5th child in the family.
My siblings are 4 sisters, 3 brothers.
>> I have 4 sisters and 3 brothers.
Now, I was 2 children\'s mother and wife a husband.
>> Now, I have a husband and 2 children.
Times really was runed fast.
>> Time really fliest fast.
I live in Gyeonggi-do. It is located in the south Seoul.
>> I live in Geyeonggi-do. It is located in South Seoul.
I try to anything smile, enjoy, happy.
>> I always smile and I want to always be happy.
I didn\'t become a big rich but I am happy.
>> I didn\'t become rich but I am happy.
See you tomorrow... Gabby.
>> See you tomorrow, Gabby.
From Susan.
>> Correct.
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