Introduce myself(For OPIC)

2010-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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My name is [Name] Seu-Jae. I majored in Electronic Engineering. I chose this major because I wanted to be a Engineer who make fabulous gadgets and give extreme pleasure to the users. Now I took a first step to my goal. Because I got in the global Electronics company which is Samsung Eletronics. A a new employee in the company, Everyday is challenge to me. Sometime it's very hard to learn the proces of the company and cuttig-edge technology. Whenever I have a hard time, I always try to recall the goal that I made up. And that give me more energetic.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!   That was an interesting self-introduction and a short description of your chosen career

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