Introduce our Kimchi!
학생이 쓴 원문
Kimchi is our traditional food.
It tastes very spicy. but it's too yummy.
And it took away greasy! So I like it very much.
It use hot pepper and cabbage~!!
I want introduce this food to all the world
강사 첨삭
Hi Sarah! It's nice of you to be proud of what you have in your country. Honestly, I've tried eating Kimchi but I didn't like it. But I must say that I was happy to have tried it because it is one of your traditional foods. See you later, have a great night!
T.GRACE ^^
Kimchi is our traditional food.
>>CorrectIt tastes very spicy. but it\'s too yummy.
>> It is spicy yet yummy.And it took away greasy! So I like it very much.
>> And it removes any greasy substance when you eat it as side dish so Iike it very much.It use hot pepper and cabbage~!!
>> Kimchi is made up of hot pepper and cabbage.I want introduce this food to all the world
>> I want to introduce this food to the world.
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