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I have four family members. They are all well except my father. Now I'd like to talk about my father. earlier, I think I owe my father my success. When I was 12 years old, he had a big car accident at that time whose job was a texi driver. So, he was in danger enough to cut his one leg. In spite of that, he didn't give up his normal life because of me who was an elementary school student. Luckily now, he can walk norally do. He always said to me "as I did over come, you must not chicken out and challenge even if there is a slim chance." until now he consistently supports me

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Karla

 

I have four family members.

>> Correct

They are all well except my father.

>> Correct

Now I'd like to talk about my father.

>> Correct

earlier, I think I owe my father my success.

>>  Earlier, I think I owe my success from my father

When I was 12 years old, he had a big car accident at that time whose job was a texi driver.

>> When I was 12 years old, he had a big car accident. At that time his job was a taxi driver.

So, he was in danger enough to cut his one leg.

>>  Correct

In spite of that, he didn't give up his normal life because of me who was an elementary school student.

>> In spite that, he didn't give up his normal life because of me who was an elementary school student then.

Luckily now, he can walk norally do.

>> Luckily now, he can walk normally.

He always said to me "as I did over come, you must not chicken out and challenge even if there is a slim chance." until now he consistently supports me

>> He always said to me "as I overcome my obstacles, you must not chicken out and face the challenge even if there is a slim chance." Until now he consistently supports me